Response to prompt #10 http://trailbrazin.blogspot.com/2016/02/prompt-9-i-forgot.html
Five Important Places I Forgot
by Helen Sadler
How easy it is to lose touch with the natural world. When I
was writing everyday about the Five Questions, I found it easy to stay
connected. Now I can see that I
have dropped that part off of my life for some reason. I have spent precious
little time in the natural world for several months.
No wonder I am not well currently. That I’m popping pills
just to stay in the game. That I watched a whole week fly by without much
change.
So I have taken Herrara’s poem “Five Directions to My House”
and wrote a new version. And
somehow I will pull myself out of these doors and appreciate the Florida sun
and sky and trees.
Let the change begin.
Five Important Places
I Forgot
Go back to the limestone rock by the lake, where the eastern
sky is soft with sunrise.
Walk into the woods, the dampened trail, until it ends in
prayer.
Beneath the sand on the beach, the crabs hide while the tide
glides in.
You are almost there, about to remember what keeps you
intact.
I said five, but the starry night of no moon says six.
Beautiful. ...you write the most magnificent nature poetry.
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